A human that turns into a Robot Master > CHECK
Get friendly with who supposed to be in the Bad Side aside Wily > CHECK
Can grow up > ????
CHECK
After all she’ still a normal human, only need to stop being Robot Master all the time but if she grow up she will lost her robot master side. The closest Robot Masters who is Ranay’s friends if stay as human for long time will grow up too.
after 21 she works as kindergarten teacher as she thinks “Caring for children is not much different from caring for Robot Masters”
>Making Top Man look like a pedo (She’s 11 now.)
CHECK
>Getting away with stuff for no reason
CHECK
>Still a Mary Sue
VERY CHECK.
- Second note I can’t help but wonder if Ranay’s “de-age” was the result of a previous blog post commenting how a teenage Ranay was beating up a child Rock or an average retcon?
I hope I’m not the only one who’s noticed Ranay’s obsession with drawing Top Man as a cat…
oh excuse me “NEKO.”
Alright well I will say that Caroline has improved a little. There’s still a lot of things wrong with this picture.
1. The light source is completely random. One moment it’s coming from the left (near her face) suddenly it’s coming from the right (Near her legs), and THEN it’s from up above (her bow). If you’re going to draw a lightsource make sure it is coming from one location. Unless there are supposed to be multiple light sources, however that does not seem to be the case.
2. Her chest is malformed, even for a robot they should not be that pointy, and it’s obvious you’re not trying to give her a super pointy chest.
3. The lower part of the hair is okay, the area around the bangs needs work. Those random dark lines seem to be there for the sake of being there and aren’t really benefiting the work. Same with the random bright lines on the boots. Are they supposed to show fuzziness or that they are scuffed a bit? It’s hard to tell.
4. Her eyes are not properly spaced/too big. She looks wall-eyed. Like her eyes is over by her ear.
5. Is she supposed to be holding a metal blade? The blade needs to be a bit more rounded, it looks more like a spark is coming out of her hand than she’s holding a blade. That or the blade is horribly dented, it looks nothing like a blade.
6. The legs and feet, they aren’t properly alighted, her pose overall looks a little awkward, like she’s standing on an uneven surface. If she tried to stand this way she would most likely fall over.
7. The neck is a tad too long. and doesn’t connect to her shoulders properly. In fact it seems completely detached, it’s mostly the left shoulder. It’s drawn too low, it looks broken.
8. I must say I love the shading on the skirt, but if you are going to implement such dramatic shading you need to do so to the rest of the body. Especially the arms and legs. There’s little to no definition to them compared to the skirt, face, or the bottom of the hair. The the shading on those are the strongest, the rest pretty much falls flat.
9. In summery, try to find a definitive light source, the anatomy needs a bit of tweaking, and make sure that if a shadow is definitive it effects the whole piece, not singular areas.
Overall this piece is okay, but it needs a lot of improvement.
one last note
”Ps: Is that a Metal Blade?
Yes, Metalman is her favorite Robot Master.”
Yes, obviously Caroline has walked up to Roll and asked her what her favorite robot master was. Caroline’s headcanon is absolute, and if you do not believe it then you are a dumbass.
That was old, that is what happens when i mine my macromedia files…
I guess this is about the one of two things about Topman i couldn’t translate or understand…
The second is Wheel-greasing
WHAT IN THE HELL IS LUCK-PUSHER, SHIT?
Hmm, is that hard knuckle?
Oh my god the EVERYTHING in this picture. This is painful to look at it.
Also did Caroline just admit that she couldn’t translate one of her own drawings?
That is hilariously ironic. Considering she stated that learning the English language is completely unimportant and something she would never need in the future.
…I have no words… really…
Derp Twilight Sparkle and Spike as Vocaloids.
Because when I think of robot Japanese popstars I think of My Little Pony. AMIRITE?
(P.S. What’s going on with Twilight’s arm there?)
Welp…
A boy search for someone, everything he found was a curled paper, after he unwound it, it was a letter, was written:
-Never Forget it: Wasurenaide
The boy know what is written in this letter, laughed sardonically but as the voice of the person reaches him, he starts to cry. And say:
- Wasurenaide
CRAWWWWWLIINNGGG INNNNNNN MY SKINNNNNNN
THESE WOUNDSSSSS THEY WILLLLL NOT HEAAAALLLLLLLL
Hello…
Sitting on top of the world
Watching the stars
Go by
I got my head in a dream
Got my head in the clouds
I can fly
I can fly
I can fly
So get high, get high
Get high, get high
So get high, get high
Get high, get high
Oh Ranay’s “high” alright. She looks high out of her mind.
Umm… It looks like Ranay is trying to pull Top Man off the pile…
Isn’t she worried about falling off?
So Top Man’s “ID” Monster is a monster of lust who’s soul purpose is to try and rape Ranay?
… Top Man’s “evil” side is that he wants to RAPE. RANAY.
All of this being caused because he KISSED RANAY.
…WHAT?!
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